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Hetalia-Germany by angelicdusk

"Alright men! Ready.. Aim.."
You broke free of the strong grip of your German fiance and bolted towards the shooting grounds.
"Fire!!"
"No!" You screamed as you reached out your hand towards your parents who were propped against the wooden poles, blindfolded. Lightning cracked in the sky as the guns were fired making it hard to distinguish the two. Rain began pouring as you tripped and fell on the ground.. It was too late. You laid on the ground, tears streaking your mud splashed face. Your hand was outstretched towards to two slumped over bodies that now lay lifeless. You sobbed hopelessly as there was nothing else you could do.. You were now left with the guilt of their deaths, despite what they would want you to think. The last thing they spoke to you was in fact the opposite, it was their dying wish that you'd live your life, regretless, with your German officer.

As you laid there weeping, you felt steady arms wrap around you and lift your trembling form into a gentle embrace. You didn't have to open your eyes to look, you already knew who it was.
"Liebe," Ludwig whispered into your ear. "We should go."
You opened your tear filled eyes and were met to his ice blue ones. You nodded slightly and tried to get up. Your legs gave out and he caught you. He knew you didn't have the strength to move, so he lifted you tenderly in his steady arms. You held onto his neck as you continued to cry into his shirt. He carried you back to the crowd. This was a bold move, as officials of Germany were not allowed to affiliate with commoners such as yourself in affectionate ways. He knew the consequences of his actions just now, but he didn't care. He loved you more than life itself, more than his life, which was on the line as of now. His commander witnessed the act boldly performed by his favorite underling and was baffled. He knew that he couldn't allow his men to see him as a kind hearted captain. He nearly choked on the words as they exited his mouth.
"Men, turn your guns on that soldier."
Ludwig turned and faced his captain with disgust. His eyes said enough. With you still in his arms, Ludwig fled, turning his back on his captain. A dejected look crossed the captain's face, hoping Ludwig could read what his eyes had spoken. He silently counted to three before shouting,
"Fire!"
Obedient bullets flew from the guns, directed at the two lovers. You braced against Ludwig, clutching on to him for dear life as lightning cracked in the sky.

You bolted up in bed, as you heard the low rumble of the thunder outside. Your eyes were wet from all the tears shed as you dreamt of that tragic night again. You felt a stir next to your as your now husband, Ludwig, was staring at you with his icy gaze.
"Liebe," he began. "Did you have that nightmare again?"
You turned your head from your husband and nodded as you tears began to trail down your cheeks again. You felt a large, calloused hand wipe your tears away as you looked into the face of your beloved. He smiled slightly, "Ich werde dich nie gehen lassen, liebe. Come lay close to me."
You settled in his arms, laying your head on his chest. You could hear his steady heartbeat, and you fell asleep to it's rhythmic sound, encased in his embrace. When he was sure you'd fallen asleep, his kissed you forehead lovingly. "Ich werde dich beschützen, lieben. Für immer und ewig."
Okay guys Google Translate can really suck sometimes, so if the translation isn't right, let me know! I'd like to change it as soon as possible!
Ich werde dich nie gehen lassen, liebe. (I'll never let you go, love)
Ich werde dich beschützen, lieben. Für immer und ewig. (I'll protect you, love. Forever and always.)
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:iconthrashinpony:
ThrashinPony Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
XD -emoticon Germany (Shy) [V5] d'awww
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014   General Artist
-hugs Ludwig with bonecrushing strength- I'm never gonna let go.
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:iconkomeko-chan:
Komeko-chan Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
KAWAII ;v;
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flyingmintbunny2013 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student General Artist
O/////O
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:iconmomopeach101:
momopeach101 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz:
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:iconinvadersharie:
invadersharie Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz:
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:iconmikides:
mikides Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz: :iconsqueeeeplz: :iconmegablushplz: :iconfangirlingplz: and for zhe ending~ :iconitssofluffyplz:
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TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfrenchsquealplz:
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Quity190 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...:iconsqueeeeplz:
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Car1ba Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Really cute :)... and in order to help with this translations:
"Ich werde dich niemals loslassen, Liebling."(I'll never let you go, love.) "Ich werde dich beschützen, Liebling. Für Immer und Ewig."(I'll protect you, love. Forever and always.) ... though I have to say that google translate did a decent job this time - aside from usage of capital/small letters ya' know? That is kinda unique and somewhat difficult ... ^^' um... Yeah anyways ... Did I mention, that I liked this story?
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Artist
Lol thank you! :iconsnugplz:
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Germany is sweet and protective~!!
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:iconcar1ba:
Car1ba Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
You are very welcome ;)
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:iconsarebear16:
Sarebear16 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww love it!!
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:iconzekka12:
zekka12 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
was it a dream or did I die?
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student Artist
It was just a flashback of what happened in the past
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:iconzekka12:
zekka12 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
oh so I live yessss
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cammie1212 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
aw thats so cute and sad and tragic all in one
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
so sad
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annebear1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
gaaa... this is so sad, yet the ending makes up for it! i love it!
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iiibrokeyhu Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gahhhh... I always liked Germany and this will be like heaven! :iconnosebleed-plz:
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Genevieve124 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013   General Artist
The concept was great but here try this website instead. (It does multiple languages correctly!)

[link]
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Artist
Oh my gosh thanks! That'll help me out a lot! :iconyutasmileplz:
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Genevieve124 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013   General Artist
Yep <33
I am learning French and German maybe Spanish later so I have been using this a lot.
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ronnieangell Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
:iconfeelsplz:
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mist-no-heart Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
the feelings :iconpassoutplz:
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lollipopwentpop Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
amazin
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Artist
Thank you! :iconbrohugplz:
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Ponylover153 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg...I love it!
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selenawatershine Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
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:squee:: FEELS
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FrauAlanis Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think you wanted to say 'Beloved' when your write 'Liebe' as an address? Male form is 'Geliebter' or 'Liebster'.

The rest of the translations is fine.

Nice story :)
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Artist
Thank you for the confirmation! :)
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FrauAlanis Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You are welcome :)
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AH! DARNET! ALL MY FEELS RAN AWAY!! :iconfeelsplz:
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Doryu-chan Featured By Owner May 21, 2013   General Artist
Curse you feels!
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Candiisaur Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So cute omg :squee:
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:iconangelicdusk:
angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Artist
Glad you liked it! :iconyutasmileplz:
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:iconcandiisaur:
Candiisaur Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem
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mrsprime1 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Loved it!
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dodo44554 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
;_; that was SO sad
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MongooseMyth Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
:iconcryforeverplz::iconruncryplz:
WHy, oh why was I given feelings?
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SilvercrossStahlherz Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww...that was sweet!
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angelicdusk Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Student Artist
Thanks :iconanimesmileplz:
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SilvercrossStahlherz Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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